Firstly, there should not be any spaces in the names when connecting via FTP.
Secondly, the server usually has ftp. infront of it, so by the settings you have given me, it should be:
Server: ftp.ormskirkandmaghulllions.talktalk.net
Username should be ormskirkand(e-mail address removed)
(however, this should be the same as the server, so ormskirkandmaghulllions.talktalk.net, but it may be as you said)
Password: should be the password you chose.
I have edited your password, as it is not wise to show your password as other users can assess your site.